For my magazine, some of the writing doesn't make any sense. also the picture of 'Timmy" should be the right way up. Lots of people are saying the layout was quite good but some of the writing is slightly larger. i have created a simple and easy to read of the pictures. Some people don't understand the questions but some people understand the questions and they like the colours and image. Some people think the idea is alright but the colour behind wasn't match. I'm think I'm using the yellow colour behind the cool man show it can attract the audience. also i have to set out the price for the magazine. This is a very good imagination to create the page.